1.4 - Sonnet 29
Context
Social and cultural context
- In Victorian England, society expected women to be passionless and submissive, especially in relationships.
- Expressing strong emotions or sexual desire was considered scandalous for a woman.
- The poem was written privately for Robert Browning during their secret courtship, as Elizabeth's controlling father forbade his children from marrying. This privacy allowed for a level of honesty about desire that would have been unacceptable in public.
Literary and biographical context
- Elizabeth Barrett Browning was already a famous and respected poet when she met Robert Browning.
- She lived as a recluse for years due to illness and her father's control, before eloping with Robert at the age of 40.
- The poem is a Petrarchan sonnet, a traditional form of love poetry typically written by men about distant, idealised women. Browning uses this form to express a much more direct and physical female desire, challenging literary conventions.
Psychological and emotional context
- The poem asserts female sexual agency in an era that largely denied women had such feelings.
- It explores the idea that obsessive thoughts about a loved one can become a barrier to true connection, replacing the real person with an imagined version.
- Barrett Browning argues that physical presence and sensory experience are superior to abstract or spiritual love, a radical idea that contradicted Victorian ideals of purity.
Overview
Sonnet 29 "I think of thee," in a nutshell
- What literally happens in the poem: The speaker describes how her constant thoughts about her beloved have grown like "wild vines" around a tree, hiding the real person from view. She then demands his physical presence to destroy these thoughts and enjoy a real, sensory connection instead.
- Context and significance: Written by Elizabeth Barrett Browning for her future husband Robert, the poem challenges Victorian ideas about female passivity by expressing an intense, active desire for physical intimacy. It argues that real presence is far superior to imagination.
- Key techniques and approach: Browning uses an extended metaphor [symbolism that continues throughout a text] of vines and a tree to explore her feelings, contained within the traditional structure of a Petrarchan sonnet.
Translation and Browning's intent
Lines 1-8
"I think of thee!—my thoughts do twine and bud
About thee, as wild vines, about a tree,
Put out broad leaves, and soon there 's nought to see
Except the straggling green which hides the wood.
Yet, O my palm-tree, be it understood
I will not have my thoughts instead of thee
Who art dearer, better! Rather, instantly"
Translation
- The speaker exclaims that she thinks of her lover constantly.
- These thoughts are like "wild vines" that grow and wrap themselves around her image of him, who she compares to a tree.
- The thoughts grow so thick, like leaves, that they eventually hide the "tree" (the real person) completely. She insists that she does not want these thoughts; she wants him, as he is "dearer, better".
Browning's intention
- Browning establishes the poem's central problem: Obsessive thoughts, while seemingly loving, are actually a negative force that obscures reality.
- The extended metaphor of the "wild vines" suggests her thoughts are natural but have become excessive and uncontrolled.
- The exclamation "I think of thee!" immediately establishes an intense, passionate tone, which is sustained throughout the poem.
Lines 8-14
"Renew thy presence; as a strong tree should,
Rustle thy boughs and set thy trunk all bare,
And let these bands of greenery which insphere thee
Drop heavily down,—burst, shattered, everywhere!
Because, in this deep joy to see and hear thee
And breathe within thy shadow a new air,
I do not think of thee—I am too near thee."
Translation
- The speaker commands her lover to "Renew" his presence immediately.
- She wants him to be like a "strong tree", revealing himself and shaking off the "vines" of her thoughts, letting them fall and be destroyed.
- She explains that when he is physically present, she can experience him with her senses ("see and hear thee", "breathe"), which is so joyful and complete that she no longer needs to think of him because he is right there.
Browning's intention
- This section marks the poem's volta [turning point in a sonnet], shifting from describing the problem to demanding a solution.
- The use of imperative verbs [commands] like "Renew", "Rustle", and "set" shows the speaker taking control, asserting her agency and desire.
- The final line resolves the poem's argument: Physical closeness is the ultimate form of intimacy, making thoughts and imagination unnecessary. The sensory language celebrates an embodied, physical love over a purely mental one.
Writer's methods
Analysing form, structure, and language together reveals how Browning constructs her argument. She uses a traditional poetic form as a container for radical ideas about female desire, making them more acceptable to a Victorian audience.
Form
The poem is a Petrarchan sonnet, a highly traditional form for love poetry. This choice of form is significant in itself.
| Theme | Evidence | Poet's intention |
|---|---|---|
| Intense emotion | The poem uses several exclamation marks, such as "I think of thee!" and "shattered, everywhere!". | To create a breathless, excited tone that reflects the speaker's overwhelming passion. The punctuation performs the gasps of desire that Victorian women were not supposed to express openly. |
| Female desire | Browning uses a Petrarchan sonnet form, which was traditionally written by male poets to express admiration for a distant, idealised woman. | To make her unconventional message about active female sexual desire seem more legitimate and acceptable. By placing her radical ideas in a familiar, respectable form, she can express them without causing scandal. |
Structure
The poem's structure is built around a clear problem and solution, marked by a powerful turning point.
| Theme | Evidence | Poet's intention |
|---|---|---|
| Female agency | The poem has a clear volta [turning point] at line 9 ("Rather, instantly / Renew thy presence"). The first eight lines (the octave) describe a problem, while the final six lines (the sestet) demand a solution. | To show a clear shift from passive thinking to active demanding. This structural turn enacts the speaker's empowerment as she decides to take control of the situation rather than just suffer from her lover's absence. |
| Overwhelming passion | Browning uses enjambment [line runs to next] throughout, such as "soon there 's nought to see / Except the straggling green". | To create a sense of breathless urgency and rushing thoughts. The speaker's passion cannot be contained within the strict line structure, so it spills over, mirroring her uncontrollable feelings. |
| Shifting power dynamic | The poem begins by focusing on the speaker's internal world ("I think", "my thoughts") but shifts to directly addressing her lover with commands in the sestet ("Renew thy presence"). | To show the speaker moving from internal reflection to external action. This shift in address demonstrates her growing confidence and agency as she stops thinking and starts demanding. |
Language
Browning uses an extended metaphor and sensory language to convey the power of physical love.
| Theme | Evidence | Poet's intention |
|---|---|---|
| Imagination vs. reality | The extended metaphor of the speaker's thoughts as "wild vines" that "twine and bud" about the "tree" of her beloved. | To show that imagination, though natural, can become destructive if it grows out of control. The word "hides" is key, as it shows how her thoughts are obscuring the real person, creating a barrier to true intimacy. |
| Physical desire | The speaker commands her lover to "set thy trunk all bare". The adjective "bare" has clear connotations of nakedness and physical exposure. | To express sexual desire in a coded way that would be understood but not seen as improper by a Victorian audience. The natural imagery of the tree allows her to discuss physical intimacy without being explicit. |
| The superiority of presence | The final lines use sensory language: "to see and hear thee / And breathe within thy shadow a new air". | To celebrate a physical, embodied love. By focusing on senses like sight, hearing, and breath, she argues that being physically present is a more powerful and joyful experience than any spiritual or mental connection. |
What to compare it to
When comparing poems, focus on how poets use different methods to explore similar themes. It is important to make direct links between the poets' choices and the effects they create, considering the context in which they were writing.
Suggested comparisons
- Sonnet 29 "I think of thee," and Porphyria's Lover - Both poems explore obsessive and overwhelming love from a first-person perspective, but present contrasting views on power and desire.
- Sonnet 29 "I think of thee," and Love's Philosophy - Both poets use imagery from the natural world to argue for physical union, but their speakers have very different tones and approaches.
Sonnet 29 "I think of thee," and Porphyria's Lover
Comparison in a nutshell
Both poems, written by the Brownings, explore obsessive love and the desire for total possession of a loved one. However, Elizabeth Barrett Browning presents a joyful, consensual desire, whereas Robert Browning explores a darker, destructive obsession that leads to violence.
Similarities
Point
Both poets use a first-person perspective to create an intense and intimate emotional atmosphere, exploring a love that is all-consuming.
Evidence and explanation
| Sonnet 29 "I think of thee," | Porphyria's Lover |
|---|---|
| The speaker's opening exclamation, "I think of thee!", immediately establishes a passionate and personal tone. Her thoughts "twine and bud" uncontrollably, showing how her love dominates her mind. | Similarly, the speaker's declaration that "Porphyria worshipped me" reveals an intense and obsessive internal world. His love is so consuming that it leads him to a shocking act to possess her forever. |
Differences
Point
While both poems explore a desire for closeness, Barrett Browning's speaker seeks a mutual, living connection, whereas Browning's speaker enforces a permanent union through violence.
Evidence and explanation
| Sonnet 29 "I think of thee," | Porphyria's Lover |
|---|---|
| The speaker uses imperative verbs like "Renew thy presence" to demand that her lover come to her. Her desire is for an active, shared experience where they can "breathe" the same air. | In contrast, the speaker takes ultimate control by murdering Porphyria. He states, "That moment she was mine, mine, fair," and preserves the moment by strangling her, turning her into a passive object. |
Endings comparison
Point
The endings of the poems starkly contrast a joyful resolution with a disturbing stillness, highlighting their different messages about love and power.
Evidence and explanation
| Sonnet 29 "I think of thee," | Porphyria's Lover |
|---|---|
| The poem ends with the confident and peaceful realisation: "I do not think of thee—I am too near thee." This line celebrates the fulfilment of desire through mutual presence. | Conversely, Porphyria's Lover ends with the chillingly calm observation that "God has not said a word!" The speaker sits with his victim's corpse, creating a disturbing final image of possessive love taken to its extreme. |
Sonnet 29 "I think of thee," and Love's Philosophy
Comparison in a nutshell
Both poems use persuasive arguments and natural imagery to express a desire for physical intimacy. However, Shelley's speaker is manipulative and questioning, whereas Barrett Browning's speaker is assertive and commanding.
Similarities
Point
Both poets use imagery from the natural world to argue that physical union is a natural and divine law.
Evidence and explanation
| Sonnet 29 "I think of thee," | Love's Philosophy |
|---|---|
| The speaker's extended metaphor of "wild vines" and a "tree" frames her desire as a natural, growing force. She wants to be physically "near" her lover, presenting this as the natural resolution to her thoughts. | Similarly, Shelley's speaker points to nature, where "The fountains mingle with the river / And the rivers with the ocean," to argue that all things are meant to mix. He claims this is a "law divine". |
Differences
Point
Shelley's speaker uses a series of rhetorical questions to pressure his lover, while Barrett Browning's speaker uses confident commands to assert her own desire.
Evidence and explanation
| Sonnet 29 "I think of thee," | Love's Philosophy |
|---|---|
| The speaker's tone is assertive and empowered. She uses imperative verbs like "Renew", "Rustle", and "set" to command her lover, expressing her desire as a right to be fulfilled. | In contrast, Shelley's speaker tries to persuade his silent listener with questioning phrases like "Why not I with thine?" and "What is all this sweet work worth / If thou kiss not me?". His tone is one of logical persuasion bordering on manipulation. |
Endings comparison
Point
The poems conclude with different emotional outcomes: Barrett Browning's ends on a note of triumphant fulfilment, while Shelley's ends with a frustrated, unanswered question.
Evidence and explanation
| Sonnet 29 "I think of thee," | Love's Philosophy |
|---|---|
| The poem resolves with the certainty of physical presence eliminating the need for thought: "I am too near thee." This is a statement of fact and contentment, bringing the emotional journey to a satisfying close. | Conversely, the poem ends on a cliffhanger with the final question, "If thou kiss not me?". The lack of response from the lover leaves the speaker's argument hanging and his desire unfulfilled, creating a sense of frustration. |